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Bobwire-Hell Part 1-chapter 4 by ~Bobwire-Hell:iconBobwire-Hell:



Zerio and Arukooru along with a few other men were shoved inside a shed like building with bunk bed.

"Well I guess this is our home now..." Zerio said sadly. He headed for a bunk at the very end and ploped down on the thinnly stuffed mattress.

"No. It will never be our home!" Arukooru yelled jumping on the top bunk. A hugely built half demon strutted over to Arukooru's and Zerio's bunk. He crossed his arms and scowled.

"This here is my end of the room!" He threatened. Arukooru sighed.

"We're in a shit hole and you're trying to start shit with us? Why don't you go and join the demons while you're at it!" He snapped, jumping onto all fours. Arukooru's hands had morphed themselves into large tiger paws. The cracking of his bones reforming and his muscle's tearing apart and attaching themselves were so loud, it had disgusted the rest  of the house. Everyone looked back over to the corner to see what kind of mess was going on.

"You dumbass!! You're gonna die here but you rather start shit with us for a bunk!" Arukooru yelled, grabbing onto the half-demon's chest.

"You better leave, boy!" He demanded. The Half demon squinted his eyes as if he could see what was going on. "I could squish you like a bug!" He had grabbed Arukooru's neck and tried to pry him off of himself. "You're just a pussy cat." Zerio stepped forward.

"Let him go," He warned. The bear demon roared, shifting into his bear form. He threw arukooru into Zerio and they both tumbled to the floor. The door at the other end opened suddenly and two large Panther demon soilders took the bear demon away. He burst into tears and tried to fight. One of the panther soilders turned back, "No fighting, or its death." Then they closed the door and the others could still hear the bear demon's screams of terror. Arukooru's eyes widened.

"Holy shit, batman." He muttered in awe. "They're gonna kill that guy," He sighed "I'm glad it's not me they chose." He stood up and dusted himself off. "Zerio, lets get some sleep..." Zerio nodded, shaken slightly and climbed into the bunk.

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Karagi stood paceing watching the door waiting for Cheero.

"If you're waiting for your friend, I bet shes dead. She was stupid..." A girl said from a bunk behind her. Karagi turned around, frowning.

"Shut up! Shes not dead!" Karagi yelled. The girl stuck out her tongue at Karagi.

"I bet so!" She crossed her arms and turned back to stare at the bunk above her. Karagi had tears coming from her eyes and she sniffed the musty air.

"Please Cheero, don't be dead..." She said almost silently to herself. All of the children that weren't killed were marched into the building that the women were bunked at. The kids scattered to their mothers or sisters, clinging onto them and crying. Midon hadn't come in, nor Cheero. Thoughts of evil started to flow through Karagi's mind.

"I can't believe it..."
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Cheero snarled in pain the whip struck her back again. Salt water was thrown onto her back after a while to add a extra sting. Militancy watched with a smug smile on his face.

"Now there. More pain will be inflicted if you choose to be bad again," He said kneeling down next to her. Cheero just snarled at him and glared. Militancy just laughed. "Do the same to the boy," He ordered. She couldn't see Midon but she knew he was in the same room as her, and now it was his turn.

"No! Don't hurt him! Punish me more for his actions!" She pleeded. Militancy smiled.

"He will get what he deserves. And it'll be double of what you recieved." He looked over to a guard, "Use the nine tail!" He ordered, then nodded to confirm. The guard switched whips and walked to Midon who was being held down onto a crate, his back up. The guard cocked his arm. A grin appeared on the guards face as if he was going to enjoy it. He released, cracking the whip upon Midon's back, tearing the skin and making deep gashes. After two hits, Midon fainted from the pain and loss of blood, but that didn't stop the guard from releasing the whip fury. The whipping continued for another 18 hits, making a total of 162 gashes on Midon's back side. A woman stepped into the room and stood beside Militancy.

"What did these two do, Mili?" The woman asked, putting her hand on his chest.  Cheero cried and snarled at Militancy and the woman. She looked and seen both the guards had gathered around Midon and she flung upwards, standing and charged at Militancy's back. She dug her fangs deep in his shoulders. He yelled in surprise and tried to fling her off. Cheero only held on tighter and sunk her fangs in deeper. She shifted to her wolf form and used her back claws to stay on his back better and held on tightly. The guards surrounded her and tried pulling her off. The woman tried as well, but no luck. Finally a guard was able to knock her out and off Militancy's back.

It was hours before Cheero woke again, and when she came to, she was in a different room, alone. The room was dark and dank. The floor was cold and felt like stone. A few rats could be heard, but they were harmless. At least Cheero had something to eat. A guard opened the door to Cheero's cell.

"You'll be in here awhile. So you better get comfertable." He cackled as he slammed the door.
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Author's Comments

More to come! :D

cheero and zerio (c) to ~Nazi-Mutt
karagi, arukooru, and midon (c) to ~Kawaii-Chocobo
militancy (c) to =Xbakkari
Loreli [the woman] (c) to ~FluffyTiget16
random bear half-demon named Sumaro randomly made by Kawaii-chocobo


choose which icon you like more or make one yourself and send it in. make sure its bobwire-hell related. thanks [link]

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:iconkawaii-chocobo:
aggggggggggghhhhhhhhhh!!! MORREEE!!!
:iconxbakkari:
maur. :heart: :B

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:target: APERTURE SCIENCE :cake:
:iconnazi-mutt:
we need to rp...SOME MORE.

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Get the fuck in my PANTS!!
:iconfluffyoj:
Needs moar.

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Hey, man please don't make a sound, take a look around.
Can't you see whats right infront of you?
[Lame. Signature. Thing.]
:iconbobwire-hell:
^__^ There will be more later tonight hopefully.

~~~Kawaii-Chocobo
:iconbobwire-hell:
That's all that we have so far, we haven't rp'ed past there. But later tonight, we'll be putting up more hopefully.

~~~Kawaii-Chocobo
:iconfluffytiget16:
Good job guys! ^^ I am still upset about Cheero and Midon....D: Midon It'll be okay!! TT-TT

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Careful....tigets like to eat checker pieces...
:iconkawaii-chocobo:
XD Thanks Manda!! Yeah, Midon and Cheero are pretty close in the story... They'll be okay... I hope. XD I'm not telling you what happens!! Because for one... I don't know what's gonna happen either.
:iconfluffytiget16:
o.O Okie!!

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Careful....tigets like to eat checker pieces...

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